Wednesday, January 14, 2009

inept

(please)

with (don't) me please

toy

toy

love is but a fragile pain intent 
on shattering my 
discontent

and I (violently) do nee

somehow do (self) wish.

(please) 

that it could be this.

1 comment:

RCM said...

nice (for) your poetry st(i)le
(love) the s(u)blties
Sometimes it comes off sounding like you are trying too hard to (man)age the paradox of meaning with sub meaning.

PS Actually I just wrote that message for its secret hidden message.